Writers' Circle

The comments start here.

“It needs more dialogue”
“You were writing yourself in. Get rid of the first three paragraphs.”
“Have you thought of writing it as a radio play?”
“I like the voice but the narrative structure is wrong.”
“I don’t understand. Is this the same novel you read from last week?”
“Could you read that bit again - where they’re on the kitchen table? I think it might be physically impossible.”
“Have you thought of writing this a poem?”
“You should have finished the chapter earlier. Cut the last page.”
“It needs far less dialogue.”

- then back to the beginning -